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A couple of summers ago I went to Puerto Rico. Puerto Rico is a small country in the Caribbean. We left early in the morning to catch our flight. The flight took 3 and a half hours. Later we checked in to our hotel and the first thing we did was go to the beach. Puerto Rico has the clearest water I鈥檝e ever seen. Puerto Rico also has caves and mountains. The mountains in Puerto Rico were nice. The mountains have narrow roads leading up all the way to the top of the mountain and back down. The road was the most dangerous road I鈥檝e ever seen. My dad still insisted that we go up to the top by car so we can get some pictures of the view. The roads had no guard rails and when you are over 2,000 feet above ground it is kind of scary. Snorkeling is another big thing in Puerto Rico. You can jump in almost anywhere in the warm, clear Caribbean Sea and find beautiful sights and fascinating marine life. From the coral reefs offshore to the bizarre burrowing creatures of the back bays. San Juan is the capital of Puerto Rico. San Juan is where we ate most of our meals and did most of our shopping. The streets in the city were also narrow. Like in Europe the roads were mostly one way streets. The sidewalks were filled with a lot of tourists from a lot of different countries. Almost every 30 feet there was an art gallery. Since my dad likes art a lot he stopped at every single one. We also visited an old fort in Puerto Rico. The fort was built in the 1500s to protect the island.. The whole fort is built with stone. The walls are massive and the dungeons were pretty cool. We took some nice pictures and we enjoyed exploring the fortress. It was like one big history lesson. We spent eight days in Puerto Rico so we could have time to do everything there. When we went there I had the most Pina Coladas ever. Pina Coladas are shakes made from coconuts and pineapples. This whole trip was a great experience and we will probably visit Puerto Rico in the future. OK that sounds good. I am not sure what grade you are in, but I would suggest a few changes. Like PR is not a country. It is a carribean island that is a commonwealth of the US. The fort is called El Castillo San Felipe del Morro or to locals El Morro. & you can go into more detail about the things you visited like the beach. & I am glad you liked the trip- Hope you get a good grade!!! Not a country, an island (in a way we are part of the united states so we are not considered a country). Roads do have guard rails. The name of the fort is El Morro. Go to this website tells u which places to visit and gives a brief explanation. http://www.solboricua.com/sanjuan.htm... Just some notes... Puerto Rico is Caribbean Island- Territory of United States- (That's why you don't need a passport to travel to and from PR to Continental US). There are two forts in old San Juan you can visit- San Cristobal and San Felipe del Morro. The biggest of the two San Felipe del Morro. May want to try organize the flow of the information and accommodate in more than one paragraph. |
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