For photography class, I need adjectives, so tell me ten words describing at least one of the pictures. Describe mood and the model and maybe tell me in a sentence what you think the model is thinking.
Keep negative critique to a minimum- i know these aren't great, but it's the best I can do with the resources given me.
Here are here pictures:
http://ochispiret.deviantart.com/art/pre...
and
http://ochispiret.deviantart.com/art/tic...
Thank you!
Gah, i'm bored now.
So...
Whadja have for lunch? I had a caramel apple. Okay- I'm SUPPOSED to be getting other people's critique. I'm not, like, cheating or anything.
And I'm only bored because I have nothing esle planned today. And if you must give me critique, take into account that I'm JUST outta middleschool, here. The second photo:
pensive, distant, sepia-toned, forlorned, meh, unexcited, framed, sad, quiet, calm
I can't imagine what she's thinking.... most probably what you are directing her to do. I like the expression she creates as she glances off downwardly. IS the point of your class to do the critiquing yourself??
What do you think???
I think you would take my comments as unwanted criticism, so I wont leave it.
If your so bored, maybe photography/art isnt your thing. |
