Any good photography display websites with good critique?

other than Deviant Art and Photo.net?

There are a few photographers on http://www.thecorruptedcanvas.com/

try this one, its brand new

http://www.thecreatorinme.com/index.php

www.betterphoto.com
www.photozo.com

flickr.com

I recommand you a Free Online Photography Course

http://www.photography-tutorial.info/

it include ten lessons on Photography.

Lesson 1: Composition And Impact - It's A Beautiful Photograph, But Do You Know WHY It's Beautiful?

Lesson Two: Aperture And Shutter Speed - How They Work Together

Lesson 3: The lens - choosing camera optics.

Lesson 4: ISO, Grain, Transparency vs. Negative, Specialty Films

Lesson 5: Fun Effects - Camera Filters, Soft Focus, Zooming And Panning

Lesson 6: Landscape, Nature and Travel Photography

Lesson 7: Portraits And Studio Lighting

Lesson 8: Studio Lighting - Still Life and Product Photography

Lesson 9: Tying It All Together

Lesson 10: Special Requests

http://www.photography-tutorial.info/

good luck !