Rate my poem?

Idiot savant,
A bloodied picture frame,
Beef curtains and a cigarette chain,
Idle heroes carted away,
Hide behind brick walls,
Dancing on wooden floors,
Minor celebrities pushing one another aside,
Looking for the camera lens,
Urine stained underwear strewn over the bed,
Idiot savants getting paid to be wed.

i had to read it a couple of times to get it....but it's quite funny actually...you're telling us what an idiot savant is....i think it's creative how you criticize and describe them at the same time (unless you AREN'T criticizing..jk..) .....keep on going!! Perhaps you should put some lines together, so they're in the same topic or category cuz it might be kinda confusing the way you put it, but it's ok......i love your style!!
Hope this helps!!
Have fun!!

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ill give you a 50

lawdy what you smoking?

9

Oh GoD

if 10 is terrific, then i give u a 1

........ i got nothing. that made absoltley no sense at all.

Don't give up the day job!

100. for you.VERy good!

I liked it.

It remninds me of that Reality TV show where they marry people.

HAHA You're a bit of a worry LOL

Can't wait for the 2nd verse :D

YOU HAVE A TOUCH

100,cool man,you're a poet.like myself.heres one of mine.
Life exists,but then exits.
Born,work to live,then die.
Its always a sad ending.

I give it a minus -5 Reeks of degradation......

cheap

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