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I'm Bethany, my heritage is German, Cherokee Indian, irish and Dutch. I have lived in Wisconsin my whole life. In my free time I like to go swimming, be at the gym and shop. I have a boyfriend, we have been dating for four years. I believe strongly in loving yourself before you try to love others. I first knew I wanted to be a model when I was 5. I entered in small fashion shows for malls and prom dresses. I picked it back up just less than two months ago and things couldn't be better. I have already worked with many great photographers in WI and in MN. Met with an Agency and started the ball rolling. Life isn't all about looks though and no one stays young forever. That's why I believe that education is the key in ones life. I just finished my second year of college, I'm majoring in Psychology with an emphasis in children and adolecense. There are no grammatical errors as such. You did well. But I'd suggest some style corrections. I'm Bethany. I have a hail from a mix of German, Cherokee Indian, irish and Dutch heritages. I have lived in Wisconsin my entire life. During free time I like to go swimming, work out at the gym and go shopping. I have a boyfriend whom I have been dating for four years. I believe strongly in loving yourself before you try to love others. I first knew I wanted to be a model when I was five when I modelled small-time for malls and prom dresses. I picked it back up just less than two months ago and things are very bright now. I have already worked with many great photographers in WI and in MN. I got associated with an agency and set the ball rolling. Life isn't all about looks, though and no one stays young forever. That's why I believe that education is the key in one's life. I just finished my second year of college; I'm majoring in Psychology with an emphasis in childhood and adolecense. Hope I've helped you. So what is the question? I dont see any problem with your grammar. Your grammar is fantastic honey but maybe there is something specific you wanted to be rephrased, please elaborate...xxx ur grammar is good no problem * View mbw m's Profile * mbw m * Member since: January 27, 2007 * Total points: 170 (Level 1) * Points earned this week: * --% Best answer * mbw m 0 Please correct my English grammar? I'm Bethany, my heritage is German, Cherokee Indian, Irish and Dutch. I have lived in Wisconsin my whole life. In my free time I like to go swimming, be at the gym and shop. I have a boyfriend, we have been dating for four years. I believe strongly in loving yourself before you try to love others. I first knew I wanted to be a model when I was 5. I entered in small fashion shows for malls and prom dresses. I picked it back up just less than two months ago and things couldn't be better. I have already worked with many great photographers in WI and in MN. Met with an Agency and started the ball rolling. Life isn't all about looks though and no one stays young forever. That's why I believe that education is the key in ones life. I just finished my second year of college, I'm majoring in Psychology with an emphasis in children and adolecense |
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