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The book So B. It by Sarah Weeks leads to a character named Heidi who doesn鈥檛 know when her birthday is or who her father is. In fact, the past of Heidi and her mother is a mystery. Heidi lives in an odd lifestyle with her mentally disabled mother and their neighbor Bernadette. Heidi always has luck, and it points her to the right direction, but Heidi wonders more about who she is, where she came from, and why is it only she and her mother. When a mysterious word comes out of her mother鈥檚 vocabulary, starts to haunt Heidi, and leads her to Liberty, New York, in search of her mother鈥檚 past and most importantly her past. The main character Heidi shows three main characteristic eager, brave, and smart. The character Heidi is eager. Even if Heidi doesn鈥檛 know her past, she has a lead, and she is eager to find what her mother鈥檚 past was about and most importantly her own past. She demonstrates this characteristic when she made a big decision to go out of Nevada to Hilltop home. She wanted to go to find a person named Thurman Hill to get information from an old photo Heidi had found in an old camera. Supposedly the photo was from a Christmas party that her mom was in. Another example of this trait occurs when Heidi made a phone call to Greyhound from a phone booth that was outside, and she found out two important things. One, was that it cost $313 for a round-trip ticket to Liberty to Liberty, New York, and two, she had to be fifteen years or older to travel across the country by herself. Heidi decided to get her money from a slot machine since she knew she had a lot of luck through her life. A quote from the story reveals this trait clearly, 鈥淵ou think I鈥檒l forget about soof and Hilltop and all the rest of it, you want me to forget, but I won鈥檛. If I do, I鈥檒l end up like Mama, full of missing pieces.鈥? Heidi鈥檚 drastic plans show how eager she is to find out why her mom keeps saying the word soof, and also what the photograph has to do with the word. And so, Heidi is an eager character. The character Heidi is brave. When she finds old photographs of her mom at a Christmas party, she鈥檚 brave enough to go on a cross-country journey by herself from Nevada to Liberty, New York on a bus. This shows that the character is brave because she has the courage to do something that no twelve years old could do. Heidi had never been to New York and never traveled alone. Heidi said to herself that she would have to go to New York no matter what. This demonstrates that nothing could stop her in search of her past and also her mother鈥檚. And so, Heidi is a brave character. The character Heidi is smart in unique ways. Even though she鈥檚 only twelve years old she鈥檚 determined to get to liberty, New York to ask Mr. Hilltop about her mother鈥檚 past. She demonstrates this characteristic when she wants money for a bus ticket and she uses her talent in winning that money from a slot machine. Another example of this trait occurs when she wins the money and has to count the quarters so it makes $313. A thought from Heidi reveals this trait clearly, 鈥淚t was early in the morning and nobody was around to pay attention, so I squat down next to the machine and counted out my winnings. Twelve hundred fifty-six quarters. One dollar more than I needed.鈥?This demonstrates that even if Heidi didn鈥檛 have a lot of time to study she was very smart in math. And so, Heidi is a smart character. Heidi鈥檚 eager, brave and smart through out the whole book and that makes her an exciting and hard working character. Heidi expresses emotion in every thing she says and makes the book more interesting than it already is. So B. It is such an amazing and sad book, because there is a lot of suspense going on and heartbreaking moments, and an unforgettable book. You should rewrite your essay on this novel. Below is a thesis statement, which will help you with your body paragraphs. So B. It: Novel by by Sarah Weeks: Thesis Statement: As Heidi journeys into a new world to untangle the clues, she learns about truth, friendship, loyalty, and responsibility. what grade are you in? because this needs work if it is a high school essay. Keep working on it and good luck. You first need to organizae your paragrahs. Rewrite then post it again, i'll be happy to correct grammatical errors. |
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